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My story begins with my fear of cats. Cats have always hated me for some reason and have tried to attack me but luckily my family, friends, and dogs have stopped them from attacking me and dogs have always loved me but one day a cat actually attacked me. I was walking home from school and it was a bright sunny Friday and i was looking forward to the camping trip me and my family would go on tomorrow for i have always loved nature and the animals but a bully stopped me.
"Hey Anna" "hi...." "i heard you loved cats so i brought my cat so you can cuddle him" "c-c-cat?!" "yeah *holds out a crate and opens it" "Come on out Mr. Fluffy *the cat jumps out of his crate*". When the cat saw me it jumped at me and started scratching the top part of my face I didn't do anything because i was paralyzed with fear but i was some how able to distract the cat by taking off my book bag and throwing it in a different direction.
When the cat was distracted I ran with my blood getting in my sky blue eyes i had a little trouble seeing but i was able to run into the forest and my eye color went from sky blue to blood red.
In the forest i meet a wolf by the name of Wight Paw who could speak human and i was a little frightened at first but I became part of his pack and he taught me the basics of being in a wolf pack like hunting and he taught me how to speak wolf/dog. The thing i owe White Paw the most is the fact that he helped me overcome my fear of cats and i replaced my fear with anger and rage and i wanted that bully to feel the pain that i felt.
Two years later i confronted the bully in an alleyway when i was 16. I started punching and kicking him and i was about to leave when something shiny caught my eye. The thing that caught my eye was a knife so i picked it up and started slashing the bully with it.
"gah. what are you doing you are going to kill me i didn't do this to you!" "You don't deserve to live!". I kept on slashing him until i stabbed his heart and i left it in there when i went back into the forest.
For me killing a person is just like hunting an animal. I started wearing a mask to cover up my cat scratch scars because they were not won or fought for so they were not noble. I use a bow and arrow because i learned how to use one at wilderness survival camp and i'm rather good with it.I started calling myself The Silent Killer when i heard a bunch of people saying "There is a Silent Killer on the lose" the next day after i went hunting and a week later i started feeding my wolves the people i have killed. I like to hunt in a tree at night waiting for a person to take a nice stroll thinking it's safe. So there you have it this is my story now go away before i decide to kill you      
I have FINALLY made silent's story and i'm very lazy at times
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NightmareMillenium Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
This isn't you afraid of cats, is it? Because if so, I must draw you being trampled by adorableness....

This one is also very good, has a very good story. The only thing is that how you have it written out is Roleplay style, instead of story telling. For your first line of dialogue, it should be something like this:

"Hey Anna." >Insert bully and action<
"Hi..." I replied sheepishly (or something like that)

Details are always a key for a good story. You have the great ideas, and you have a great start to writing and such. I think you could be a very good writer
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sally390 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I want to write a better story for her but I don't know how and I'm not scared of cats i'm just uncomfortable around them because I'm normally around dogs but if I know the cat then I feel comfortable to around it  
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NightmareMillenium Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
I understand that perfectly. I can help you with that if you would like, but a good story doesn't take an hour to complete. The silent killer seems like it would be a good story
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sally390 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It took me a long time to come up with enough ideas to write her origin story 
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NightmareMillenium Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Seriously, it takes a really long time to write a good story. The only story i have on my DA is only a chapter and it took me almost  month to complete a single chapter.
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sally390 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Okay.....what do you think of Jenny Coffins story 
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NightmareMillenium Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
I havent gotten that far yet
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sally390 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Okay
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LeatherIceCream Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Nobody give this person Battleblock Theater. He\She will not like it much very.
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sally390 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
are you talking about Silent or Anna?
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