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A lot of people keep asking me why, when, and how I became a murder I guess it all happened a few years ago on a dark stormy night me and my brother were sleeping then we heard some noise and we were going to mom and dad's bedroom to ask them to check it out and then when we opened the door just a crack we we heard our parents scream then stop and we saw the person who murdered our parents.
I was 13 and Jimmy was 11 when our parents were murdered. Me and Jimmy quickly hid some where safe where the murder would never find us and he left a few minutes later and i never forgot what the man looked like.
A few years passed and Jimmy and I had gotten used to depending on each other but during then i went a little insane and one faithful day it happened. I murdered the man who killed our parents when i was 16 but Jimmy was watching me even though i told him not to. Jimmy was 14 at that time and I saw Jimmy out of the corner of my eye I went up to him and told him this.
"Jimmy can you keep a secret for me?" "sure what is it sis?" "I need you to keep the fact that I am your big sister a secret from everyone because i don't want them to hurt you and my last name is now Coffin" "but why do i have to keep that a secret and why would people hurt me?" "because i'm a murder now, i have gone a little insane, and people might hurt you to try to get me to help you so they can capture me so please keep the fact that i am your big sister a secret from everyone, okay?" "yeah, okay i will do that for you you" "thanks Jimmy *hugs jimmy*" "your welcome Jenny Coffin "hugs Jenny*". That is the story about how i became a murder now go away.  
I hope you all like this story ^^
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sallyxslender Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love it! :D
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asminer311 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
FEELLSS!!
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sally390 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yes even more feels than your picture of them
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LarkaFlame Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Great work! It's amazing how some siblings like these two above can get along brilliantly- not forgetting the Frye family of course.
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sally390 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks ^^
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GamersArtist Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Doesn't have to fit what the stero-typicalness of Jhonn/Jimmy! I LOVE YOUR IMAGINATION-NESS! ;u;
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sally390 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks and this is Jenny's story and maybe a little bit of Jimmy's story which I might make because I already have ideas for it
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GamersArtist Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool.
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sally390 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah but I am very lazy at times also good night
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GamersArtist Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Good night.
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sally390 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
good morning 
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kagefan-121 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*persent day*
Jimmy: *is relaxing* toast tea now
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sally390 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Jenny: *cleaning her knives*
Max: May I have some tea?
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GamersArtist Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Good morning!
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nightfallandicestorm Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student Artist
cutes
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sally390 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Jenny C: how is this cute?
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nightfallandicestorm Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student Artist
idk really its cute and sad X3
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sally390 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Jenny C: Now you know why Jimmy asks you if you want to know his secret 
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kagefan-121 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Jimmy: *grabs jenny* sis you should not go all crazy on an person here *gives jhenny some tea*
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sally390 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Jenny: *drinks some tea* ^^
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kagefan-121 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
jimmy: *sighs in relfe*
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sally390 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Jenny: So how did you end up in Ghost's head?
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nightfallandicestorm Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student Artist
yep
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xXCommanderPyroXx Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
This is nice! ^^
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sally390 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks ^^
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Callymae00 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This is awesome! Great job! Sry I couldn't help much... I'm not really a story writer tho I'm actually making a story right now... Sry I ramble...
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sally390 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it's okay ^^
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